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I had no idea that my tendency towards - and fondness for! - creating something that abruptly changes pace and meaning had a name; a volta. Thank you!

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Sweet dang this was a nice read. And the ideas were beautifully weaved and explained. I love how you give desire to a poem, that it wants to go through tension and release, that it has it's own needs which if fulfilled will make it into a great poem. Can't wait to apply this and learn more from you.

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I love this herb metaphor for the turn of the poem! Very true (and delicious).

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